How to rewrite
Rewriting is hard, but crucial. It’s often really difficult to part with things you love about your script/story/blog/etc even if it’s for the good of your work. So Justine Larbalestier has written a fantastic piece about how to rewrite. She gives some great, practical examples, including how even Snakes on a Plane could have been a better movie with a good rewrite.
Snakes on a plane spoiler alert:
“In one scene Mr Jackson has to go down into the snake-infested part of the plane to flick a switch and save the plane from crashing. But it’s all too easy and he returns unscathed. Boring!
I would have introduced the snakes more gradually and would have had Samuel L. bitten by one with a slow-acting venom very early on to make the whole movie a bit more DOA. Can he save the whole plane and himself? Will there be an anti-venom waiting for him if the plane arrives?”
Link. via John Scalzi
SoaP is ruined for me!! No, seriously great thought about rewriting. Refining any work of art is the important step that takes a great, raw idea, and makes is awesome. Unfortunately many people just leave the raw idea and don’t fine tune.
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